I Raised A Disabled Tyrant in the Future

Rika stared at her friend in the rearview mirror before pulling into the drive and shutting off the engine. Looking at Takashi she said, "Okay smart guy, we're here. Tell me what you think will convince me."

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He'd been to over 1000 worlds in that time and each battlegrounds would last between 100-2000 years! The last world he was on was by far the longest, and he ended up getting killed by an assassin! At least, that was the best guess he could make! He died in his sleep, and the b*tch he was sleeping with probably poisoned his drink!

Miria: Okay..

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Samantha is in her room arranging her things when a certain someone grabs her right arm and forced her to face her. "What is it?"

Fell in love with the story after three chapters man

Okay this is my review!World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established.Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes.Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, NarrationWeakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis