Not enough world back ground I feel like this is a mix of full metal alchemist world with the seven deadly sins homunculus but there called the seven nightmares. .... many stolen names and ideas from other famous creators shows that you could have just made up yourself to save the trouble. Literally have one punch man written word for word in your novel bro that’s just plain stealing. Forced plot of moving from one organization to another to fast no consistent power scaling literally everyone is at the same power level. Trash mc being put through so much stressed to further your plot cause you don’t know how to write a story just about him. Too many full metal alchemist rip offs what was the point of having all his arms and legs ripped off bro do you know what phantom limb pain does to you I don’t care how strong. A rapper is you should be going through something when you forcibly get your limb cut off.Dad forced to die Cause no one orginization can keep him safe for long. My advice to you is stop stealing sit down for a second and make your own story bro cause I’ve read it somewhere else
wooooooow Author! Honestly, I got intrigued by the synopsis... And when I read chapter one.. boom! Overflowing sadness.. You almost pulled my tears out of my eyes! Ghad. Hopefully, you'll update this Authooor! Keep up the good work! Fighting :)
I really like the new version of the novel. Its much better. you get into the story really easily and the grammar has improved. I really like the story and its just a fun novel. I recommend you read it!
I'm the author, of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars ........................................................................................................
Imagine living 32 years of your useless life and still clueless about the way society operating even after reincarnating to the body of 12 years old kid. Even having degraded IQ and dehraded mentality. Remember, your reader isn't 8 years old kiddos who yearn for heroic tale in this site.
This is an epic. It is really thrilling and I love the suspense. It is making me curious. waitiwaiting for next chapter. I loved the character of hazel park and Kate Evans.
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