really promises to be great, don't give it up, but all in all, I would like to see mc as king or at least some general I can't wait for him to come and show others his power, for example in the fight with a dragon
This novel is perfect for beginners in light novel reading. A light emphasis on describing characters and enviroment. Room for improvement but definetely worth reading.
The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential
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