I destroyed the world to see its Annhiliation Ending.
And I possessed my Character Olivia in the game.
However… … .
[The world is rebuilt.]– NPCs killed by you return.– Princess Aria hates you.
– Sword Saint Kiel wants to slit your throat.
… … Isn’t that a bit of a regression?



Objective assessment: 0.5/5 (Terrible, one of the worst I've encountered.)
I simply cannot proceed with this.
The translation quality of this series is abysmal, not quite at the low-level machine translation level, but consistently flawed throughout numerous chapters.
Moreover, the author appears to be inexperienced. The writing style is rudimentary, with a narrative structure that reads like, "I am here. I do this. Next, I do that. Oh, by the way, we're back to the previous point." It's jarring and disorienting, with pacing that feels uneven and chaotic.
Rarely do I find the need to re-read to grasp the plot, but with this, even repeated readings prove insufficient. The characters are dreadfully flat and underdeveloped. From just the initial chapters about the main character, I can recall their name, occupation, but that's about it. There's no emotional depth, no complexity – they're as bland as a limp noodle.
The story has 209 chapters, which means not all 15 regressors were fully explored, but those with significant screen time are enjoyable to read. There are some flaws, such as rushed character development and occasional plot holes, considering it's the author's debut. It's understandable that managing multiple complex characters is difficult, and not everyone can match the storytelling prowess of George R.R. Martin.
A spoiler alert: Korean authors often employ a common trope where a future heroine reverses time to save the main character, inadvertently kicking off the story. In this case, Olivia reincarnates as the male MC and finds herself in a game related to her origin. However, the logic gets confusing with regards to how Olivia's actions, especially her death, align with the MC's game runs and her ability to retain immortality. The identity of the game developer who brought the MC into the game world remains unclear, with hints suggesting Olivia's involvement.
Despite these plot holes, the story provides a satisfying read with over 200 chapters, offering a better experience than typical cookie-cutter Korean power fantasies. It's not groundbreaking, but it's a decent choice among similar game-themed stories.
In conclusion, the story is passable. Olivia, as the main character, is competent, and supporting characters perform their roles adequately. The genderbending aspect doesn't significantly impact the narrative, as the MC accepts his new form. Overall, it's an acceptable read, but don't expect it to be a masterpiece like "Omniscient Reader."
Now, with a mission to avoid killing anyone, Olivia navigates through the game with the opposite goal, as everyone around her is intent on eliminating her. As another reviewer pointed out, although the translation might present some challenges, it's far from being the worst, and overall, it remains mostly understandable, improving as it progresses.
i read lotm and shadow slave and are 10/10, i hope you can suggest something as good.
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