It's good so far. But I really hope this won't be a typical cliche novel where a supposedly dangerous and psychopathic yandere obsessed with another person suddenly becomes an uwu girl for the MC and accepts any girl in his harem.
I know I shouldn't judge this one early, but it lacks appeals on me.
No offense on this, although I'm only at chapter 6, I dont want to read the rest of the story. It's not my cup of tea.
For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism.
The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality.
The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?
I do not plan to insult or offend anyone, it is my opinion of the novel.
The novel has potential, a good development of the world and a clear level of power developed.
And there my good opinion remains, the characters feel stupid, especially the mc, to begin with he seems to doubt life at all times, he never thinks about things and does everything on "impulse", until now he has not done anything thinking , from the beginning to the current chapter, he has been told that his ex-girlfriend is alive, which is the main and only reason why he transmigrated, but until now he has not done anything to find out her whereabouts, consult with his system, goddess or not even investigate or try to find it, another example is that of the mc leaving his position as heir to the duke, there is no logic or real reasons behind that, the mc knows that they are going to remove him from his position, and for that reason he resigns a month before When he could try not to remove him, taking advantage of all the resources that the heir to Duke would have, and also ignoring his sister's clear affection for him.
Another issue is the mc taking it all as a game after almost dying 2 times in a row and experiencing a death.
I'll leave it there, but the more you advance, the more stupid the mc is doing.
story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.
MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more.
Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.
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No offense on this, although I'm only at chapter 6, I dont want to read the rest of the story. It's not my cup of tea.
The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality.
The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?
The novel has potential, a good development of the world and a clear level of power developed.
And there my good opinion remains, the characters feel stupid, especially the mc, to begin with he seems to doubt life at all times, he never thinks about things and does everything on "impulse", until now he has not done anything thinking , from the beginning to the current chapter, he has been told that his ex-girlfriend is alive, which is the main and only reason why he transmigrated, but until now he has not done anything to find out her whereabouts, consult with his system, goddess or not even investigate or try to find it, another example is that of the mc leaving his position as heir to the duke, there is no logic or real reasons behind that, the mc knows that they are going to remove him from his position, and for that reason he resigns a month before When he could try not to remove him, taking advantage of all the resources that the heir to Duke would have, and also ignoring his sister's clear affection for him.
Another issue is the mc taking it all as a game after almost dying 2 times in a row and experiencing a death.
I'll leave it there, but the more you advance, the more stupid the mc is doing.
Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.