The story is great, the way you portrayed how your closed one (best friend ) can turn into a foe with time, how in one second everything changes and it hurts when you know you are right but no one trusts you. Well done btw, good luck
Oh gooood! have been waiting for this for a loooong time,I really liked this web novel but the translation speed is only 1 chapter per month sometimes its 2-3 months till it completely stop translating now I wish it will have a fast translation.
in the disciple accepting system novels group this one js among the bottom tier(the lowest according to all that i have come across) totally unoriginal as atleast half have some twist but this is just trash
Okay so, cards on the table, I haven’t read this story yet. I gave a rating just to comment cause I’m not sure where else I should put this but here goes: Dear Author, darling, honey, sweetheart you need to fix the grammar in your summary. It doesn’t flow well and sounds mighty awkward this can drive people off your story making them less inclined to even give it a go. Don’t get me wrong I think it’s super cool of you to put your stuff out there for others to read this is just a tip for reference. Good luck!
"Follow the red line. It will take you to Megacles." whispers Lodestone. "If they catch her, they will destroy Leviathan. If they catch her, they catch all of us. Someone needs to protect us."
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