HUANG YUE

This was very good. The dynamic between Austin and the FL felt very smooth. Most importantly no character felt it was too dumb or two-dimensional. Though I do wish the author would leave his other works and just focus on this one.

The pace of the plot is moving too quickly, much like in the first chapter. Before diving into the story, it would be helpful to establish the world's backstory, provide descriptions of the protagonist's parents, and introduce the location where he was bullied. While the writing and grammar are strong, the rapid progression makes it difficult to connect with the character's development and the intensity of his hardships. Add a chapter exploring the bullying experience that could help to build empathy and showcase the protagonist's determination to overcome those hardship. Despite these areas for improvement, the story has great potential. Keep up the excellent work dear author

Just Started. Looking good...............

This novel is written so beautifully, making its easy for us to get lost in the story. The updates are always on time as well. The story keeps getting better and better. The characters feel real and relatable and the background story is engaging!Overall, everything about this novel is perfect! ⭐

My goat has released his another book so ofc it's gonna be peak, good luck for this book (and I am first not noob)

Very interesting take on the isekai genre with a unique main character.