Rating(4.1 / 5.0, 40 votes)
5 stars
15(38%)
4 stars
15(38%)
3 stars
10(25%)
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  1. Vincent_Bossert
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    blonde hair, blue eyes. i wonder who is cover girl ? rina / lina ? arwin ?
  1. Kelvin_SekwatirR
    Kelvin_SekwatirR rated it
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    It's the princess
  1. SebastienLecours
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    The story is 8/10, the secondary characters are 7/10, but the main character is 2/10. He's literally older than his siblings but behaves like a child. I thought he would improve over time but he remains the same. He doesn't see his flaws or try to fix them. I know the main character is weak, but he doesn't make an effort to improve even though he's in a fantasy world where strength matters a lot. He doesn't have to be strong, but not even trying is annoying."
  1. Slowdown
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    Most of the time, you'll feel like you're in the middle of someone else's conversation without a real beginning. Writing is hard to follow since it jumps around from scene to scene without logical connections or context clues quite a bit. MC will be complaining or explaining something to himself in his head directly at the reader in a 4th wall break while scenes with unidentified speakers play out in the background before pausing his rant and looking at something taking place in front of him and start describing it. Translation seems janky in the strangest places like they took a literal meaning for a Korean euphemism instead of using an equivalent analogy. You'll get kicked out of any sense of immersion every few hundred words since it's confusing as to where they are in the world, timeline of the story, or characters within the scene at any given moment.
  1. DanielKennedy8979
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    For a story I picked up on a random whim; due to finishing too many stories. This is actually really well written and has a lot more character depth and plot design than I expected. 10/10 for interesting characters. 10/10 interested plot line for a generic fantasy setting. Definitely worth reading the first 15 Chapters. I'm currently on Chapter 157 and I can't wait to see how the story continues to develop.
  1. RavenDiamond
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    Can someone tell how big the harem will be because I can’t stand harems with 10+ people
  1. KhyaaLhLl
    KhyaaLhLl rated it
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    dude is there any meaning after 1+ ?? what's the concept of 10+
  1. ZEPHYRUgQ
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  1. Jacky0211
    Jacky0211 rated it
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    If you want a MC who only knows how to fight or is a manipulator, definitely do not read this novel because it is not for you.When I saw the harem tag in the novel, I thought that it would be a very difficult harem like the classic Korean novels and that MC was an *d**t who did not know how to deal with women, so I didn't want to read it but I decided to give it a chance and I'm glad I did, it was a really different style and novel, I liked it very much.
  1. AztecAzazel
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    Don't anticipate it as a masterpiece; read only if your options are limited and you can endure certain aspects. The protagonist重生到了奇幻世界,并通过写作对世界产生了重大影响。Being in a primarily female-centric environment, with key characters being women, the MC typically remains理智,but around female leads, he exhibits teenage-like behavior, blushing, clumsiness, and vulnerability. While the impact of his novels on the world is entertaining, a significant portion focuses on his time at an academy with these female characters, which can become monotonous and irritating at times.
  1. CubanPete1999
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    The reviewer seems to be expressing strong dissatisfaction with a novel from a platform called Novelpia. They criticize the main character (MC) for being unreliable, unlikable, and lacking a distinct personality, even comparing him unfavorably to other fictional characters with more depth, such as Japanese (JP) dense characters and Chinese (CN) overconfident alpha males. The reviewer also laments the lack of character development and a compelling story, stating that the plot revolves too much around the MC's writing.

    Despite their negative critique, they do acknowledge the illustrations and sexual content as the highlights, describing them as the best part of the book. The reviewer jokes about the author's ability to attract male readers, mentioning specific chapters for sexual scenes (Marie Ch 111-113, Cecily 166-169, Adelia 270-271). However, overall, they express disappointment and consider giving the book only one star.

    In summary, the reviewer is disappointed with the character development and storytelling but appreciates the visual and sexual aspects of the novel.
  1. Kamesking
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    I can hardly believe I forced myself to read Chapter 201. Initially, I really enjoyed the story up until around Chapter 30. The beginning had a promising start, but then it took a nosedive. The main character (MC) seems to lose his intellectual prowess, dividing his energy between writing a novel and attending a strict school in a society with nobles and royalty. I can understand the stress that kind of environment might put on someone from a modern, free-thinking background.

    However, the issue lies in the MC's character development. At 40 years old, he should possess a mature understanding of society. His literary and creative abilities in the modern world shouldn't be taken lightly. But when he enters school, his behavior is childlike, almost as if his intellect has萎缩. He forms a harem without any genuine reason or emotional connection, despite his parents being in a monogamous relationship. It's unclear whether he genuinely cares for these women or if it's just about their appearance.

    Characters like Cecil, the demon princess, were potential gems, but they become mere stereotypes with high magical power and status. Her centuries of life should have given her depth, but instead, she seems to lack individuality and rational thought. Her interactions with the MC feel forced and artificial.

    Marie's portrayal is slightly better, but the MC's romantic advances seem shallow and impulsive. It's frustrating how a supposedly intelligent character from the modern era behaves like a naive adolescent around attractive women.

    The societal norms are poorly handled, with the MC not adhering to them fully. This inconsistency makes the world feel shallow and unbelievable, especially considering the presence of gods and advanced magic.

    In summary, the lack of character growth, shallow world-building, and forced plot devices have led me to give this book low ratings:

    Character Development: 2 Stars
    World Building: 3 Stars
    Enjoyment: 3 Stars

    I wouldn't recommend this book and definitely wouldn't reread it. The more I read, the more issues I uncover.

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