I want to see MARVIN kicking the ass of the bullies that beat him so bad. let me see his sis get marry to a multi millionaire! and get op fast you got time halt!
This is a really good book to read, it leaves you wanting to know what is going to happen next, the character development is laid out well. the only thing I'm not a fan of is the apocalypse thing because its lightly talked about and it should be a parallel world not apocalypse, but I'm only at chapter 93 so I guess we will see.
Novel has other countries in it which inevitably means full retard mode "Chyna Numba 1". I'm not against some patriotism, but the Chinese version is just too cringe and toxic. It's basically a 16 year old's fanfiction of jacking their country off.OOF
just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there
it’s almost like he has one enemy throughout the whole story who keeps changing his name and cultivation, but never his mind-set... john meets the main character, insults him, coverts his girlfriend, then threaten him with the power of his sect, john get beaten up, then call his senior Joe, Joe he gets beaten up, the calls his father: sect elder, the sect gets involved, main character flees, returns and destroys the sect, but wait, the sect in under the protection of John who is from higher sect, he also has a senior named joe, whose father is the sect leader, ohhhh dear
Flow of the story is a bit jittery, with lack of commas and spacings in some spots. Paragraphing can have a little more work done, because reading a block of texts is never fun.Characters are great, despite the jittery quality of writing you can tell the characters have at least more depth than the skin. World background? Gradual introduction...? Eh, but at least it's somewhat believable, despite the fact that having languages from different worlds be so similar is slightly too unlikely. Unless we are dealing with multiverse type of transmigration/reincarnation.Overall, 4/5 stars. Obviously, English can be improved, but no one is perfect.
So stupid, so stupid I have no more words .he every few chapter's reminds that angle has low birth rate and still didn't understand his value I couldn't read more than 20 chapter's. doesn't understand the consequences of his actions.
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