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Like it so far! Good writing (English isn't my main langage thought, so I might not be good enough to see all the possible mistakes ^^), good update flow. For the story itself, the world is consistent and it is not that often that I saw authors using the three main dantian and not just one. Mixing magic and martial arts by that mean is not use often too. It seems like the author as put some thoughts in it to explain the process and not just saying "magic exists because it does...". Even thought the MC seems locked on one mindset, I like the fact that he is ruthless and don't care about moral bullsh*t or doesn't force logic to achieve his goals. He is quit straightforward, realistic and honest with himself. I wouldn't say he is a vilain, it's more like he does what's need to be done to survive while getting stronger. There is no Harem and smut cr*p so far, that's a good point too! I don't think the novel and the MC need romance either. Even if some characters are obviously here just to allow the MC to get some benefits he needs for the sake of making progresses in the story (the hunters or the unorthodox cultivators), it doesn't affect the reading that much IMO.

I'd like to say this is an interesting read... but I'd be lying.the first hundred or so chapters are nice and consistent, man reincarnated as his younger self with a system to change a dismal future.Problem being the author forgets how the character is from arc to arc.The prime example is that the mc in school constantly warns his naive classmates that the monstrous wilds are not a playground. Yet as soon as he is thrust into the wilds the mc adopts his classmates attitudes. 'Were all humans we shouldn't be fighting each other!!!'Yet he warns his classmates of EXACTLY this sort of thing.Do yourselves a favor, don't spend coins on this TRASH.

If this novel isn't picked, the old me would have committed suicide. As I grew a year older, I realized that I shouldn't die for something so good, I should live to have more of this blessings. I would strive to learn the holy language in which this holy book came from to deliver more of its greatness all over the world. Blessed be thy readers.

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I sorted have an higher expectations but got squash soon after...nice Grammer thou....with no mistakes after reviewing it again don't know if author got sloppy after  the chapter I read.all in allit's all good on specific places except some places

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Author reporting for duty !I made this realistic novel since I need a break of the fantasy novel I'm currently writing (Half-Giant Time Traveller). Read the description to know more about the novel.Anyway I write this for fun in my spare time. If you have a suggestion please write a constructive one. That is more appreciated than any cheer/hate review. Anything to make me a better author is appreciated.Cheers and enjoy!

Since its only 7 chapters there isn't much of the world building although it's a unique and refreshing storyline that you got i especially liked how you describe your creatures its well detailed and vivid im looking forward to what your gonna do to the story