Highflayer:Lite Night (Rewrite)

Solid world building. Love the prehistoric start, it makes the start very unique! It is nicely written, not too hard on the eye. Like the novel very much!

It's a good story but the story doesn't feel immersive as what you would thought it would be. There are no grammatical errors but the way it is narrated kinda feels bland. Other than that, I really think that it is good plot-wise and all.

awesome world building and storytelling. the author is sure an experienced writer. story pace and development are on point.hope to see more of this

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