I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.
Such dumb mc....till chapter 170 god....the world and the concept of bloodlines is good but the story development is so-so..and so is the character development till now...
SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman. SInce his name is Shad, that means it's Shadman.
I like your story. Very creative, its way beyond better than kings avatar and highschool dxd.Shammel penuliar would be great demon king someday, i know he will. I will keep reading this novel.
I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
<p>I scanned the room, and it wasn't just the missing cookies—it was the crumbs. Tiny crumbs were scattered leading out the door and down the hallway.</p>
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