Her Saviour

actually mc create a new genjutsu with similar to a ultimate genjutsu of shisui uchiha's Kotoamatsukami.

Going up to the highest landing, he saw a folded ladder retracted to the ceiling, a cord hanging down so the stairs could be pulled into reach. He pulled the cord and caught the stairs as they dropped to him.  The ladder led up to a roof hatch, a square door that was part of the roof, something he'd missed before.  This made things easier than using the hose he'd climbed in with.  

raithina.           *

Only 3 chapters in and so far the story is developing smoothly.  The writing is great, holds suspense, light humor, well done.

its like ai generated story and i think it has to be more improved. but its not  that bad id give it a solid 5/10, it looks like the author is new so im not complaining that much

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Ohk, everyone, we are BACK! I got a contract, had to do a review, and now we’re here—so treat this like a Q&A for the book. You got questions?Some common questions I saw readers generally ask in other books:Q: How long is this book going to be?Long enough to make you emotionally attached. (can be the next one piece) that long.Q: Is this a harem?Nope. The MC is here to fight for his life, not collect waifus like Pokémon.Q: Will the MC be overpowered?Absolutely not. He’s going to struggle  and EARN his power like a true protagonist. No cheat codes here.Q: Will there be betrayals?Oh, for sure. You trust someone? That’s on you. I’m just the storyteller.Q: Is there a system?Yes, but not your usual "Congrats, you killed a rabbit! +5 Strength!" system. This one actually makes sense and won’t hold your hand.Q: Is there romance?Yes, but it’s not instant, and it’s definitely not the main focus. No “Oops, I tripped, and now we’re in love” nonsense.Q: Will there be moments that make me want to throw my phone?Yes. And when that happens, just know that I wrote those moments with love.That’s it for now! If y’all have more questions, drop them in the comments of this review. Also, don’t forget to ADD TO YOUR LIBRARY, or I will personally send a Level 99 rat to your house.