This gotta be one of the worst Mc ever in the history of novels. The dude got 0 points in intelligence. He gets upset at every little thing and will jump into any trap and then be like oh why are you doing this? The whole story is about him simping over this chick he just met. The cultivation ranks were super confusing at one point. Still don't get why he didn't kill some of the people. Like his GF uncle who is an evil person but he kept letting him go after saying you're dead over and over.
Its my first time writing a review, so here goes.The book really......doesn't have a definitive structure. I can't say its your typical xianxia, but I can say that its worse. Humour is really dry and the characters are just flat. This book was up against Nine Cauldrons which is much better than this, but still......this somehow won cause people do not know quality.
Someone face slapping their own system with it not being a cold machine or being able to force their hand? I'll read this purely to see that! (Putting all 4s till I read and remember to change or decide too)
I love Eastern fantasy story thats why im very thankful to find this 😘😘😘 hope it update more ..thank you author for a lovely story hope youll continue it till the end
I want to see how far the power of traps can go... xD <4Please don't drop the book even after WPC is finished... I want to see you write till the end muhahah! Also, you need 5k words to qualify. Will you be ok with just 1 chapter? (Now I'm just outright pressuring you to complete this...)Anyways, fighting! Traps rule!
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
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