Heavenly Abyss

A gene novel with no synopsis... I think ive found the one....                                                                        

Historia sencilla para pasar el rato, no es buena pero tampoco mala, el personaje es sencillo y es un modo interesante de asignar un sistema sin conciencia y misiones

The author trying hard to make it funny but fail miserably. The mc is just... what can i say ? Dumb.Oh im dead. Looks like ive been transmigrated.There is no emotion you can feel there. And that apps that can sense users emotion change ? This author dont know **** about programming.

fresh. new. this novel is one of the gems that will shine sooner or later. more chaps please. writing quality is good, the flow of the story is smooth and the concept is intriguing. more please

Shameless Author #2198 reporting for duty.NevermindIf I were to rate my novel.Writing Quality - 3/5, slowly changing to a 4/5 as my literary skills improve.Story Development - 4/5 The beginning is quite slow, but it'll generally speed up as time goes on.Character Design - 4/5. Characters aren't really one dimensional, but some are just made on the spot and left by the dust as one of the MC's acquaintances. Some will appear in different instances of the novel.World Background - 5/5. The only thing I believe I did well on, not including the block of texts in the history chapter. (Don't read it unless you like that type of stuff.). The Frontier is the boundary of discovery and improvement. Follow the story as you see the progression of the MC and the improvement of my literary devices as times go on.

Apriphim roar and the battle start.

Shirohime glanced at him and saw him texting and her face fell,

" We will also wait for his Highness until he comes out ".