He Isn't My Brother

The story after Ch117 stops making sense. There are too many gaps, name, and pet changes without explanation. Some name changes may be related to translation errors, Shen Miao to Shen Yi.

This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.

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"Our inventions were designed to help all Saiyans grow stronger, not Just King Vegeta and those he chooses. This pendant will lead you to our sanctuary, a special place I and your mother built for you while you slept safely within your incubator and is where we housed are collective life's work. In that safe place you will see all are dreams and creations we made to help are people break free from Frieza and become a new galactic empire."

"And I'm Vey," The mage announced. "Esun was it?"

The reason for that is because Millet has been standing nearby her preventing Sona to do anything at all. She can't even assist her team fighting against Irene's team.

        "you're an expert." She said and smiled sweetly. I can breath her sweet scent.