Excellent history so far. Nothing to criticize but man i need more chapters, i give you my SS i hope you enjoy it.What i can't think is that there's much people reading this novel.saludos desde México
World building is great, character design is great, charaxter personality is great, no cannon fodder. Mainly focused on world building and what the leqding people at the top have to do to stabalize the world and establish growth within multiple sects. Enemies can be used and fights are strategy used to propel, they cherish there long life, not wasting it fighting, everyone is moslty undercover.
Please kindly help create more chapter on this stories I really appreciate the time you spent on bringing it up please I just can't wait to get more details on the story
interesting start i think the grandfather is an intriguing character...world building is good... storyline seems promising...there are spelling mistakes I think you can use grammarly for corrections..but I'm giving 5 stars because as a non-native English speaker i can understand that some mistakes are likely to happen, it doesn't change how good the story is...best of luck
Hello, everyone, Tyrnox back with some objective reviews.The translation quality is pretty average, some translators even check the veracity of the information used in the novel. Let's take the angel's power ranking for example. The words used are very erratic, and changes quite a bit, but the main problem is that the ranking is completely mixed up. The clarity and congruency of the information given is really bad, that brings down translation quality to 3.Stability of Updates is pretty generic, 4 stars.As for story development, one could argue that the author just randomly used names from the western mythos without knowing who they were and what functions they served, which made the story confusing for most. Another argument could be made that the author simply didn't care and googled names to use, instead of doing proper research. Doesn't matter, there's no foreshadowing, and the only thing the novel works with is plot armor and the "cheat system". From this, one could tell that the author is immature / has very little experience in literature as a whole. Two stars.Character design and World Background. For reasons stated above, they both score one star. We couldn't even get proper angel hierarchy. This would have had zero stars but I took it with a grain of salt and gave it 1 star for creativity. Let's just say the Author is creative.2.2 stars average.
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