Haunted Voices

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Plot armor too thick. Just 10 chapters and the MC already got 3 special items, and a special boss in every wave even if it's supposed to be RARE. MC is too lucky.The side characters are also stupid, the typical chinese childish arrogant people, while the MC seems to be the only one with a brain.Every character seems to have a mental age of 10, only later I remember that they are supposed to be *****.

author is using unreasonable assasination technique ... it's illogicalAuthor didn't learn about medical knowledge ; human anatomy, forensic etc....let me tell you... in the first 10 chapters, MC shifted to a fly. He stabbed the victim with a needle at the artery.that needle has 0,2 mm in width and 1 cm / 10 mm in depth... meanwhile the common carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the skin (23.5 +/- 6.9 mm) whereas the internal carotid artery exhibited the closest average distance to the vertebral body (7.36 +/- 3.8 mm, measured to the transverse process)the needle could not reach the arteryyou could see the picture

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I don't really understand. This thing is written in some kind of english language but you don't understand 9/10 of each chapter. It's really strange. I read the words and understand them but if you add the words into the sentence it just goes boof and you don't understand anymore. How did you manage that? Sorry but whatever this is, it is not a novel. Maybe it's some kind of secret message of a secret agency but it's definitely not a novel. I don't understand.

Lies, you just have a serious mental block, ideas, but no idea on how to implement them. Do what I do, read other novels to rev your engine, and finish planning what you want the other two volumes to be! Most importantly, PUT IT ON PAPER! You might have confidence in your memory, but you struggle to remember your qi cultivation system right? You made the mana system easy, but even then you have issues remembering what you named the last stage!Use those numerous notebooks you have!I've got my eye on you!

"Aiya… the little boy has fast reflexes…" A voice echoed from behind.

The three were standing beside the basketball court having their chitchat , when Michael drew his attention at them , who was busy in his basketball game immediately went away from the court to them , grewing suspicious at every step. He was amazed seeing Steven and Alisia talking happily.