HARRY POTTER:the Brothers

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This one is rough, the grammar issues are bad enough to ruin the story. I find it hard to even follow the story developement when I'm trying to figure out what the author is even trying to say.

Keren banget,suka ...Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ...Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️

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Great that the story begins with a strong, emotional hook. There is also a nice contrast between the tragical and the lighthearted, sometimes underlined by dialogue that is suitable for real characters that are a bit lost in the melancholy of the life they lead. It is really good that this started out the way it did. Now I apparently have to wait to read more, a shame, since I just got into the story and the concept is intriguing enough that this ➡️ my library

The first chapter gives out as little as possible and it pulls you in and keeps you interested to read on more and more. I feel like it's a bit early for me to say anything about the character but I have a feeling that I'll end up liking the MC. Just a gut feeling. Amazing writing, amazing story, and world-building is just *chef's kiss.*Good luck to the author!

This is very Good . .......................................................................................................................................

Stability and World Building 3* since it's new. Ultimate cultivator trying to reach peak, dies instead, then reincarnates into his young self in another timeline. Uses his own cultivation technique from his past life in this new one, which is way better by the way, and surpasses everyone in cultivation. For those who likes a-hole MC's because they are OP and looks down on everyone, then this is your jam. But this novel does it better than any others out there. Imagine, you're someone who practices an elite martial art and time travels to cave man days, guess who's gonna win? This MC doesn't give two fux about anyone, except for dad of course, and just destroys and kills, like Terminator on steroids. And that's it...dude slays. The reason I gave it low stars? I'm not into these kinds of MC'S but for those who do, you might like this one. Verdict: 50/50, depends on your taste.