At first, I was like here we go... another story of someone reincarnating and going into a VR game and taking advantage. However, I must say that I am hooked. Good writing that is easy to follow what's going on. While we do have an arrogant MC, it makes sense in the story. While he does have great fortune early on, it's not like he is completely OP. It is a good read to add to the library.
I have also read the novel you have taken inspiration from and I must say the quality of your novel matches my expectations.Really good.Awesome novel.Keep it up!Also do try to not go down the path of that novel where plot development was basically almost gone towards the end.Though fluff always keeps you hooked I guess 😃
I enjoyed your sense of humor and the astral projection setup. RIP Kobe 😭. One thing I noticed is you put plain when I think it’ “plane” unless that’ on purpose and I‘m an idiot. I’m the guy who replied on disc btw. looking forward to reading more chapters in the future.
Early review I am on chapter 85. The story is written decently when it comes to grammar, sentence structure, etc. World background is pretty interesting everyone having the chance to unlock a system and the systems interconnect in some scenarios. MC system is op but so far mc has not really taken advantage of it. Honestly mc doesn’t make many logical choices after he unlocks the system and jumps straight into adventuring. My main gripe about the story is the author doesn’t know how to portray different age levels for different characters. Everyone in this story reacts, talks, and behaves like a 10 year old. People yelling out of surprise or having an o face when they are adults living in a world that has many people fighting monsters. Overall I like the premise of the story and really hope the maturity of the characters goes up as it progresses.
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