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nah you're not. I personally like just reading without music(i do listen to music occasionally) but I can definitely understand listening with music because I would feel it helps you make a movie scene in your head

She gets mentioned but the peak of her presence was a few chapters then got forgotten or lost her relevance.

great plot thus far and action good thinking

For me the story’s peak was when David was fighting to protect Summerland and the early stages of his relationship with Celia

I think you need to give me the whole book instead of 3 chapters at a time. either post enough for it to be interesting not just a tidbit here and there.  I am a serious reader.