Getting Better With My Other Self

Really quality writing! Super impressed with this one; I havent spotted really any grammar or spelling mistakes so far - the story is really gripping. Also, I love Vampires!

I loved the story , in my opinion the author drew a very beautiful picture with his words . there were few errors here and there but i am fine with it , cause i know it is difficult to write . this book is definitely worth reading. good luck author.

My, this plot is very nice. This novel is capable of being extremely interesting and I can actually see it being adapted into a comic.

However, the multiple errors are a huge turnoff. There's more than a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Almost all sentences are without end marks.

The synopsis was short and extremely confusing. There's no problem with a short synopsis but the writer has to make it understandable, interesting and intriguing. Going into the novel, some areas were just as confusing since you worded a few things weird. The story flowed but not well. As the reader, I was not really introduced to anything, it was as if the writer expected us to already know most things about the world of the character.

Overall, this novel has a very creative plot and the writer's intentions are clear. I hope the author can work on their shortcomings and only get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]

You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer.  A novel with great potential

This is humorous and exciting! I actually admire your style in describing scenes and characters. This is really great. I added it to library waiting for more!