Usually I don't review based on grammar. But this novel is literally a SCAM. Free chapters are translated quite well, but beyond paywall translation drops to MTL quality. Names change, descriptions of stuff change, Her/him is mixed up and overall just bad grammar.Story could decent if it went on as it was for first 40 chapters. I would give first 40 chapters maybe 3.5, not bad, not really super good, but enjoyable. But since translation turns into trash suddenly changing names and stuff, it's just unbearable to go on. And really worst of all you are supposed to pay for it.I just sincerely hope nobody pays for this if they wish to continue despite the bad translation, just look for other options.
I really tried to sit here and give the book a chance like the chara is really lame but it’s easy to ignore how he acts, I just can’t continue after his comments about the type of servants he will be having like really it’s annoying when they are just surrounded by straight women.
This book is lovely! Fluffy and all...Honestly, the way that they author express the characters it's incredible. Each one of them had their own uniqueness and their personalities are portrayed very well by his writing.The story itself has a good pace, and it's enough to maintain the immersion without break the concentration.Overall, I loved it, I recommend it and it should have more recognition.
I am shocked that this novel is so highly rated despite the serious inconsistencies. In the first chapter, it is explicitly stated “Both Garen and his sister were born with dark purple hair and eyes the color of wine. Their hair color was passed down from their father and eye color from their mother”. But out of nowhere in chapter 10, they become step siblings who don’t share a drop of blood. I imagine that the author’s world defies the notion of heredity. This stood out since it’s right at the beginning of the novel. There are many more if readers pay attention that just takes away the joy of reading.
Unfortunately had to quit after the first chapter.I am confident in saying that whoever wrote or translated this didn't read it twice. All the errors made it jarring to read.
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