Game Reincarnation: Building An Empire From Scratch

i don’t know what happen but i never see new chapter for this novel and i keep wait for days or weeks now and still non hope this will not be the like the others that stop on midways

I wanted to give this a poor review, but it's definitely at least a three star novel. If you don't mind plenty of English errors, though not the most I've ever seen, and the author having no idea how to write dialogue, then it's decent. The characters don't have much depth, it's obviously a wish fulfillment novel, and there's sort of a weak to strong vibe. In a way.The story itself has its unique points and a bit of potential, but I really can't enjoy it. Honestly, the poor writing makes it distasteful, so I automatically feel like every character is less intelligent because their dialogue is grammatically incorrect. Author obviously isn't using spellcheck despite it being free in multiple programs.The author has dreams, and the courage to act on them, but not the care to see that everything is written properly. I mean, he hasn't even Googled how to write dialogue, or learned by example from literally any book that isn't a play. Don't understand how that's possible, but, I'd be willing to revisit this review if some improvement was made.

"Which young master?"

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"What do you mean? Ivar said that before every man gets married, they have to have a 'bachelors' life'. So, I asked Hilda what 'bachelors' life' meant and she said that it means to dance with different women. So here!" Asta's innocent smile almost hid the suspicious words mentioned by their main butler Ivar.

'Although this man was only at the late stage of Qi gathering, his combat power was definitely at the peak stage' he said to himself.

<p>But everything shatters in just a matter of seconds</p>

People could live there again, but there were still zombies.