Frozen convenant

I then arose up from my chair, observing my view as I fix my suit, closing the window panels.

(Weirdly enough you can fire spells through your own barrier, it also gives you more control on how much you use. I doubt anyone else from this world knows that)

Zixia was going to scream with an 'Ahh Ahh!' but Ye Bai predicted it, covered her mouth, and flicked her head to try and get her back to normal.   

The training grounds were flat fields with no grass on it. Zachary grabbed a wooden sword from a bucket of them and walked to his older brother.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Me - No

"This man really is the Maker of Worlds! Only the True Maker of Worlds would dress in his underwear so informally like that. He doesn't have any mortal worries or cares!"

Raw? Please uwu uwu uwu uwu uwu uwu uwu uwu

not bad, has the suspense feeling in it..

it's alright, somewhat contrived with character writing that just runs me the wrong way, I tried to like it but i couldn't

I read it about halfway through, and honestly, it is a very interesting book. I really like how the Biocores differ from the regular cultivation that WN offers; a very fresh start for me. Mind you, I don't read too many apocalyptic books, but decided to turn this into my first, and it is definitely a pleasant read. I like how the character and book dives into a field that's different from what other books show. he isn't some battle maniac diving into just fights, but there is weapon designs and much more, which is a neat thing. Still gonna read more to see how the character design carries forward, but I see potential in the story development. Although I love evil mc's or unorthodox mc's, I'm hoping this one won't be toooooo cliched.