Forsaken God

This is great but please use grammar properly instead of they, them and other pronouns to not be gender specific just use the mc's name because Blake is no longer a human with a gender and when using pronouns improperly like using the words they and them use the name because they and them is plural and means a group or a pair of people

I'm obviously into videogames on a whole and this book got me fascinated.The whole background was well described and the story flow is intriguing to be honest..You've got good work, keep it up💗💯

The first world is really good, the general world interesting. However after the first world  the translation qualité fall a lot. I wouldn't be surprise if it was google trad.Too bad it had potential before that.

Aslinda Ana karakter data hizli level atlasi ve daha cok  beceriler ogrense misal karakter daha hizli gelise guzel olur yeni buyuler ogrensin

First off, I'm finally dropping this novel because this chapter ends with the second time the MC gets sucked into a spatial crack and separated from everyone.That's not to say that that's not the only bad thing about it. It has more plotholes than it has... anything else, really. The biggest one is obviously the MC. He could literally have all types of beasts (or even unlimited, dunno what the author plans to keep, the type limitation mentioned in the beginning or the unlimited version shown by the memory fragment simulation), but no, somehow a handful of strong-ish beasts is better than thousands of average ones.Then there are the knowledge gaps. At the beginning, no one knows about the human/demon deal, until they magically do. Same with the continents, no one seems to know his original continent, until they magically all do.Then there's the current big bad in an undersea castle, who can apparently divine any and all information it wants, including the location of the MC's group, but for some reason doesn't just send people to either capture or kill them.Seriously, the whole story is riddled with plotholes and sidetracking.

Read everything so far, due to that cover... Cough CoughAnyway, it's quite the good read, and quite interesting as well. Story is super B, and im already loving that loli vampire just after chapter 1. Author has a good imagination, and is able to tell a very good to read story.HOWEVERthere's the problem of grammar, which often appears in conversations, in which the author isnt able to properply indicate if the MC or someone else is talking, or him thinking. grammar usually gets messed up when author tries to explain a conversation that is ongoing, especially in the first chapter. it rarely appears on the later chapters though, and mostly in the longer chapters.Im assuming the author is just tired from writing kekekeanyway, other that that, I really love the story this novel tells. All I need is more uploads! And please fix chapters one, or you might lose potential readers  author sama!To anyone about to read this novel, read it! its really good, and only need some fixing in the long chapters. grammar, punctuations, and indications

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