Forged in Lightning

People began to loot while everything started to crumble.

"Fine. Ok father i accept it all, but after this im still gonna break your bones and kick you.Wait why didnt they conquer the fifth planet?. Thats odd..". " you will know as you descend whats your three wishes?."

"Not yet, but they will let us know as soon as they have done so," replied Vernon.

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Fellows readers should give this novel a try up to 50 chapters and decide on your own if this is worth your time. Don't let other reviews stop you from reading. Remember, each of us have their own preference. Just because low ratings from others doesn't mean you have the same taste as him.Anyways for my review, we have the MC which you'll find frustrating from the start. It was explained at later chapters as to why he acts like that. As for side characters, side kicks and mobs in ** Arc that you think will be forgotten, no they will not. Besides it was also explained as to why the MC can battle like that. The pacing of story is also good. Thumbs up for that. But it lacks hype. What do we want in apocalypse novel? It's thrill and hype that can make our heart badump badump. LOL 🤣🤣 Need more scenes that would make our emotions in roller coller since it's dark days of humanity.

Its good to see new people trying their hands at writting. Its even good when those people are your friends... keep the good work Buba! Lets see what your story will become...