as at chapter 65 I'm really struggling here I can see great potential in this novel but this isn't making any sense. The mc is a coward like severe coward and everyone his age is basically a drama queen everyone throwing temper tantrums out of the blue for little to ko reason. the people that bully him he doesn't even take revenge despite now having power. this novel just feels like I'm walking in a quagmire question after question and nothing ever gets explained literally nothing
An interesting combo of gaming and 'new yet artificial world' combined with seemingly survival gam, although the characters are interesting with peculiar names ngl. Excited to see what happens next, however the rules are scary ngl, permanent death and non-permadeath. Like excuse me, don't keep us hanging like this!
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The beginning isn't that bad but this just go down. The mc have the behavior of a simp teenager.Źzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzhdhshshshshshshshshshhsjajashshdhhdzzz
Review by author.Well, more than a review it's a note for interested readers.What u can expect:1. A story with action 2. A setting with power as a core value3. MC in conflict with his own system4. MC going from strong-weak-strong5. An ambitious MC with equally interesting side characters6. A serious tone unlike my previous works7. A good plotlineWhat you shouldn't expect:1. Mindless s*x, yeah there is going to be smut but it is only to help progress the story.2. Complicated philosophies.
Remove character names and you will see the cookie cutter blandness for what it is. Honestly there is nothing special in this novel that any veteran has seen this premise done better anywhere else. Sad to see I wasted my time reading this again only to see an old comment of mines detailing how bland it is. Hopefully this review stays up.
Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used.All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.
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