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Everything is good but i found it hard to follow due to the discrepancies present due to it being a mtl. Thats mot to say its not a good story, it’s all a matter of understanding. What i found difficult to follow were the characters mainly. Anyway thanks for putting in the effort to upload and correct mistakes.

honestly, I'm only a few chapters in but I am already in love with this. To put my thoughts simply, everything, especially the characters, feels real. There's also some really clear and well-done worldbuilding as well, and I love the way that the gay community is represented in the first few chapters! It just feels genuine to me, which is something I enjoy reading and something I attept to get in my own stories (none uploaded anywhere, I'm too scared, so also kudos for uploading this), but yeah. overall, despite how little I've seen of this, it's well written, with realistic characters and a really great dynamic, 5/5! 🤍💜🖤

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

The MC is too dumb, he lived in Earth who had a lot of technology and dont know anything about them. I would prefer a MC with knowledge about Engineering, Science and Computation.

From where you leant to write this story. 😳😳😳. What a lovely story bro. I think one day you will be a writer. Haji this things ra very much realistic to some one's life bro. 🥺🥺👍🏻👍🏻

It's good at first, then it's become repetitive, repeating the same plot over and over, and side characters all become dumb; they can't even understand a situation. Mc is the only one with a brain, but again, his character should be a gangstar, but about 100 chapters later, he became an introverted teenager.

Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward.1) Poor grammar, but readable.2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense.3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything.5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators.6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates.It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.

more to put in and my review we change if things get more exciting