The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.
A beautiful and exemplary translation that is, to me, at professional level for a book featuring a complex love story between two outstanding characters. As a reader, you will never have enough and will just read without stopping ! Many, many thanks to the writer here that has taken such a HUGE work, delivering us chapters on a daily base and deserve immense success.
A well writen story so far. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay its confirm guys.. this is a dead novel... the translation stop... its been a week now... :Dokay its confirm guys.. this is a dead novel... the translation stop... its been a week now... :D
Pretty good hope fore more to come. Didn’t have any major problems except when it talked about the “Ice Age” which take a few chapters for it to be described and given in explanation.
I really like that there's a logical reason that there's a system in this. It's pleasant to read despite the few small errors and occasional things that make me go hmm. ;)I like the characters so far. There are dozens of reviews here that say things more eloquently, but, it's fun and deserves the little stars.
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