Eternal Rebirth: The System's Chosen Exile

As he walked around a familiar street, Yi Zheng looked around at the stores and the streets filled with the laughter of children and busy people selling and buying products. After walking around for a while he arrived in the front of the gate to his clan

As everything went black i thought to myself, finally this is my chance finally i can live my dreams and live as i want while travelling through world to explore and meet cute girls.

{hoste acquiere skill:businessman

"You are free," she says, a smile still on her face. It is hard to maintain but she continues. She is slowly losing energy and she feels drained. She perseveres though. He needs to hear.

C'est très intéressant j'ai juste envie de continuer à lire pour découvrir la suite

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Good concept, but too many useless details added along with pointless info dumps. The story doesnt flow smoothly and a lot of dialouges are annoyinf or forced. Too much focus on small irrelavant details.

Author, please improve your grammar so that it would be more immersive to read them. thank you.