Essence of Perfection

The story so far has been great, the journey from the village to the city was an enjoyable read. This can be attributed to the Lu sibling duo, Lu Ling and Lu Li. The stories end goal is already known, as Lu Ling tells her brother about their parents disappearance, and how to find them. And the process in getting their parents back would be an arduous journey, as it consists of a three step plan: [1] Get into an influencial family, and get stronger. [2] Find another family, but this time, a family higher up in society. And then continue to get stronger. Also, so that they have access to getting to the central plains. [3] Get to central plain and find another powerful family, so that they could help get their parents back.This is the setup of the story, however, it isnt as linear as it seems, because the Lu sibling's parents, especially their father, has a powerful family background. So, it would involve more than just getting into a family and getting stronger.However, the story, to me, loses its charm as the sister, Lu Ling, is taken away from a sect, from central plains. The story up to that point was heavily enjoyable due to Lu Lings insight into why they must continue to get stronger, and that everything tha happens to them is merely a stepping stone in their path. And how strong she is, mentally. She doesnt take **** from anyone, and doesnt rely on strength, but her wits into taking put her enemies. But, i do see why they had her taken out off the story. To help develop Lu Li's bland character. Hes strong, but only in terms of physicality. He is incompetent, and relies heavily on his sister so that he doesnt do anything stupid. So, its reasonable as to why they removed (temporarily) Lu Ling. But, then they slap us in the face and have another female character take over her place. However, she isnt smart, isnt competent, and is a person who relies heavily on the MC, only because of his strength, and his now sisters social status (Lu Ling was taken away by a strong sect from the plains). And then theres the Liu family. They are easy to hate, and only hate. They are also reliant on the MC. When their family was forced to leave their city, they had taken shelter in another place, without any money. The MC conjoured up a method to gain money, allowing the Liu family to live their once lavish lives. But, they want to steal the method so that they can keep ****** money. Also, if the owner of the place theyre staying at wants to annex them, they plan to put the blame on the MC. They have done more things to make them unlikeable. This has gone on too long, so read at your own discretion.

The character development of this book is mediocre at best. Although the plot is interesting, the main character's design is undermining the potential of this novel.

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REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGENow, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!ADVICEEdits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there  The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes! 😉

I really like this book. Well... the plot is very intriguing and the main character is just so very interesting, tho a little bit enigmatic at the beginning. However, the storyline seems nice! Can't wait to see what's going to happen!!!

It is a very good urban cultivation novel. I love the personality of the MC. He is determined and knows how to use the information he has. It's nice to collect heroines. There is pressure because of the children of fate but for now he is doing well.

"Thank you, lord."