Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
Did u look at the cover? Wow. just wow. The author did an awesome job at creating the mysterious character i.e., AJ. The author found that sweet spot of perfectly balanced Emotions that must be conveyed. Great description with such vivid details that reader cant help themselves but dragged into the life of AJ. I wished the author posted more free chapters before locking them, i felt it was too soon probably coz i want to read some more. I would highly recommend this one
Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept
"Here it is. Under this little scorch mark here is the treasure. Now stand aside, I'm going to dig up everything here and see what we got." said Mesa to Jasmine as she stood aside to give him some space. Moments later the other Mesa clones also arrived but they quickly dashed off in different directions to provide lookout while Jasmine and the original Mesa dig up the treasure.
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