The story is really interesting. Good worldbuilding, at least for the "other" world. And interesting, clever MC. He is getting more and more power tho, and we're at volume 2 right now, so the OP-ness is really starting to show. He has some significant disadvantages too, so it's somewhat balanced. I really liked the first volume. However, the second volume started really slow, with a ton of flashbacks, and time skips. The story speed, and tempo dropped significantly, and now I have buyers remorse for paying for the chapters in the second volume. It feels like filler, to increase word count.
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I have to say that this is quite a nice book. The only issue I actually have is that the release rate is quite slow for a new book. If it were actually any faster, I might give it a 5 star rating. The world plot and design is quite nice with the story's development being impressive and nice. I also like the fact the author seemed to have reinvented the entire Earth in this book though it might seem lacking compared to some others.
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