I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author. Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
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Such a shame, great book ruined by a rushed ending. To be fair, the overall story was progressing quite nicely but then all of a sudden, his power increases by like 9000% in just 80 chapters and its hard to wrap your head around it you know, and then you were expecting an epic final battle to wrap up the book? No, instead you get a confused mess of an ending and the name of a character just 1 chapters from the ending chapter and if you dont read properly, you think that it was a new character when in reality the character was introduced quite long ago. Lots of loose ends, bad ending, all the characters were stereotypes and cardboard and overall book was great until like chapter 600
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
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