I like the novel but the chapters are so short that almost of them are fillers! I'm choking on fillers! I'm slowly losing interest and my enthusiasm on this novel is waning.
This is a story that is not one. The author is only rewriting Douluo Dalu and adding a few sentences like: "MC looks on with a smile on his face". The biggest tale that there is a problem with this is that you could replace the MC with an object and you would have the same things happening. The problem is that the author wants his character to be with Tang San and co and doesn't want to change the story but doesn't make it so that his character has a story.As an example, during the Shrek academy arc, the teachers teach nothing to the MC because he is OP and doesn't need help with cultivation, but they could have set up a regiment to make him gain true experience by sending him on some adventures. What I meant by all of that is that the author doesn't make a story parallel to canon so that his character can live in the douluo world, he is only witnessing and doing nothing.That's the negative of this story, and since I don't like being negative about things I will talk about the positives.In terms of story updates, the author is constant and the quality doesn't fall.The writing is good and it is easily readable and aside from the common mistakes, like quiet (volume down) that becomes quite (quantity), you will not find anything to complain about reading this.
Everytime im log in i always check this novel for an update, I wish the update contain alot of chapter not only one chapter, always waiting for your updated novel though.
First of all, lessen the harem parts and more on the cooking parts. I just started to read and the story 30+ below are quite good, better keep that up.
The story is pretty average and the plot development contradicts the character psychology and development. Its a SMUT disguised as a retarded MC revenge story.
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