I have A question , is this novel an original one or translation?Btw good story with decent character development , although mc seem naive but still decent enough solid 4/5
Why is the mc so carless with people he trust and cant he just develop slowly. He is rushing in to powerfull people when he is so weak. Always dependent on the whims of other people. Thats just plain stupid. Why do you write it like this?
It's really good.the suspense of story and the interaction of the fortune teller.the friendship and love between them.i looking forward for there love story.the story to unfold.
An editor who selected a novel with a rating of 3.3, which is hated by pretty much everyone other than bots instead of the many other good novels available should probably resign out of shame. Shame on qidian for taking away the opportunity of good writers just to promote their agenda.
A main character I can't decide if I want to be or date. Music theme, future knowledge and megacute little sister. Merge this with a system and the chapters newer seem to come fast enough.
It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks.But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.
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