hlo author can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillersand these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count
There are quite a few problems with the translation. Why's the translator going with first name last name approach? Dai Li should be Li Dai. And please put some notes in places where Pinyin are used. The translator uses lao, which I assume is short for laoshi. I thought it was the guy's surname at first. There are also sentence formation errors, etc. after a few chapters.As for the story, since this is the first sports genre webnovel here, it's quite interesting & feels fresh to read.
It was a consistently great novel until chapter 180 or so after the betrayal, where the mc totally lost his previous character, didn't get developed properly and everything turned into nonsense. This made me drop the novel after reading over 220 chapters since I couldn't follow what even was going on anymore.
It's more of a comedy, than anything else. However, it's very enjoyable as one. I'd be happy to read more.The translation isn't perfect, but I'd say the errors are tolerable.
Alright guys, as a shameless author I will support my work and rate it 5 star... without wasting any time let me just give the pros and cons according to what I feel.Pros:1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength. cons: 1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting readAlright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...
this is a spectacular book and it gave me a look into what my book was missing. i want to thank the author for giving me the inspiration to pick up my pen and write harder to improve and show that maybe make it to the top
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