Dissolve: His Last Choice

Author, don't feel down trodden your work isn't perfect but then again no book is perfect. Not everyone will like your story-telling but that doesn't mean you have to change your story to fit their exact desires. Create the story you like, obviously improve on some logistical points like timeline, history reference accuracy, mythology accuracy and grammar. I saw many comments disdaining the usage of hypnosis for kingdom building, personally it doesn't matter as long as it matches the MC's personality. It does seem a little rushed however. Damn this was a long comment, keep up the good work!

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Alright, I must say that this book is a piece of art! I don't know why it doesn't have a review yet but here is your 5-star, I can say that this book has great potential. The idea about the slimes in the tutorial ground is interesting, I find it enjoyable to read when the MC fought them. I'm wondering when can I meet them again so as to see how will the MC deal with those slimes especially when they had gotten much stronger after they respawned.Speaking of the MC's abilities, it also caught my interest really well. I'm itching to know how will he use these abilities to fight his enemies. But as of now, the MC seemed like he is yet to try it out as he can only use the world's mana. I will watch the MC how will he learn to use those abilities and achieve strength far greater than anyone else. Thank you author for this wonderful story. I hope you have good luck and have peace of mind to maintain writing such a good story.

the novel should be good or atleast interesting but the problem is the translation, and surprisingly this bad translation is actually from henyee translation who was good translator in the past not sure what happened but their translation quality dropped

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I want to point out Author's biggest pros and cons as someone who is a big fan of author's previous 2 works. And what you can expect from this novel as well. Pro: 1.)Author NAILS the power-systems especially in Sword God, it's unironically atleast top 3 among power-systems in general. So you can expect this novel to have a great power-system as well. 2.)The training arcs are the best parts of Author's novel. They go into detail in the mechanics, with baby-steps as well as trail and errors. You feel a personal connection to the power/technique MC obtains since you saw the entire struggle of how MC obtains it and it makes all the more satisfying when MC uses them. 3.) I have never seen author write a 2D-bland character even if it's a one time occurring side character. They actually act as competent beings and possess dynamic personality. Cons: 1) Biggest Con of author is he does not treat the side characters well. Author would write a character with so much potential only to be never mentioned again. Biggest slap in the face is when these side characters die off screen and we know they are dead because so much time has passed that there lifespans are already over. This happened over and over again in Lightning is the only way, same goes for Sword god I am still mad one of my favorite character just died without ever being mentioned(I don't want to directly mention name since it's spoiler so I will just in a cryptic way say: 🔥 🌎 ) There are some other smaller cons but for the most part Author is GOAT! So I can personally expect "Kill the Sun" to be my new favorite of all times.

"Who's got who?" Amrynn asked, examining the bunch. "I've got the elf."

"if you are not a mad woman, then learn how to walk properly." Jewel responded.