Desire Series 1: My Wife is a Dominant Alpha

From that night I decided , from time to time, to eat them too, they taste like nothing, even water have more flavor, and they melt solwly in your mouth like a candy, I accumulated quite a lot of them and I'm keeping havesting them from the beast and consuming them during the night to kill the time, like pop corn or sunflower seeds...

"Hey sis, you're drolling." her sister take a napkin and act like wipping her sisters mouth, but Kim already stopped her.

Gladys yang mendengar langsung menggebrak meja. "Apa-apaan ini? Apa kamu sengaja melakukan semua ini untuk membuatku menjadi pembantumu?! ". Tegas Gladys.

*...creee..aaa...kk..*"Oh my..."

All that glitters is gold

Great First chapter. Little to no grammatical errors. A novel about vampires is always am interesting one. I like how you have described things in detail as well. Looking forward for more chapters :)

I honestly consider this book an amazing book that is quite underrated, I feel like very few people actually understand the uniqueness and beauty of this work of art. TBH, it's  actually quite similar to a book that i plan to release later on this year 😅 .My advice to the author, keep on writing! You started writing for a reason so don't give up on this book!

Interesting story premise ................... fp review