Demon King Series Books II & III

Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot  when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it.He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat.I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.

welp this is the current best for the new releases dunno just try it thier both cliche and mediocre but choose one from the lesser evil i guess

Interesting. It's good to read when there is nothing else to~~~  Thanks for the translators for their hard work. Excuse my very bad English (-_-;)・・・

The novel's okay. Has some cliches but at the same it's a breath of fresh air. And looks like in this one the transmigrator will take some time to wake up.. usually it happens in first chapter but here it only gets mentioned at chapter 19. 20 chapters are not quite enough to make up an opinion about this novel because it looks promising yet at the same time the author threw some cliches at us. MC's has different mentality than your usual MC that's for sure

I love this story. I've already finished it. But the ending is too rush.. It was disappointing. I admit, the whole story (except the ending) is amazing and entertaining... He'll just be unlucky all over again..😥Extremely disappointed at the ending... I wasted my late nights for this..

Not sure if people are able to see my author's notes or reading them so I am putting this here for all to hopefully see. Please rate/review if you are enjoying the story I would greatly appreciate it. Any votes with power stones are absolutely welcome as well! Feel free to give me constructive feedback or just have a ****** discussion about the story. I love interacting with my readers. Thanks for reading!

"Huh?"

'What could have caused this sudden pandemonium?'