De Sauris: Arcadia Twins

I liked this novel for a lot of reasons. It was similar to others of the same concept but had smooth storytelling and a decent background. Not a lot of grammatical and spelling errors and the release rate was decent. However as time went on releases slowed, to one and now it’s premium on top of the one a day release (which currently stopped since its premium stockpile is non-existent.) With the one chapter a day release it is at now regular readers won’t even get the normal one chapter until the stockpile is complete by the looks of things. Hopefully it might have been an error instead of greed.Overall, good storytelling with decent character profiles. If you like a game mc reincarnate who isn’t super op from the start this is a decent read. Just don’t expect a stable release stream right now.

The good:Translation quality and the stability of updates The bad:Character Design Beauties are everywhereHalf of the top 10 beauties are allies or enemys (China)World BackgroundIs completely overshadowed : -> Building costs, upgradesSrory DevelopmentMc gets everything, wins always and is incredibly luckyInconsistentThe wall had first 3 gates  later 4 Mc gets a sword and the sword skill , later its the spear and spear skillLuck of Mc is set to be bad but Mc is incredibly lucky -.-

This is a novel with a good premise, but that's not rare. The author does his best and he made some good plots but as usual people like me mainly remember the negatives lol.Anyways the MC's ability is good, though I don't understand why it's named unlimited growth, and he does his best to use his ability properly. Unfortunately the MC is limited by the author. The MC is focused on getting stronger and doesn't bother showing off, but the author still tries to get in that whole audience commentator thing from time to time. The one thing that was just completely dumb is that some big countries (Like the eagle country) were willing to surrender without even fighting again the aliens. Now I'm from South Africa and I'm not a fan of USA, just saying they wouldn't surrender without a fight. Anyways the MC's ability is quite good and he always gets stronger in some ways by fighting. The class he chose, while I was disappointed at first, was ridiculously OP after author showed what it could do.Now the things I felt the author didn't think of. Now the MC can get an attribute depending on the type of monster which is good and when the MC gets it to 100% is not the problem. The thing I seriously dislike is how when the MC is collecting these attributes by killing monsters it literally has zero effect until it reaches 100%. That makes no sense. He collect Sword talent and it did nothing until it was all collected. Then later on he got a strength talent from Lionman and it didn't effect strength up until he got the Titan physique at 100%. Anyways just those gripes. But overall it was quite good and I definitely hope it gets chosen since it's a Faloo novel. I would have continued reading the raws but stopped at chapter 46 since the locked chapter starts around chapter 49.

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Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later. Author's interesting note after chapter 102:,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions!If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one!I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing!In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot?But how many books did I deal with later?And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot.This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like.The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots.Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs.Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal?In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later.Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything!I really don't know how to explain it!Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to?There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived.When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it!Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this.But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others?There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, ​​God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me.So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."

The world is built from the get go, sending us straight into the action. The unique characters and strange habitat pulling us along. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work!

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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