Dawn of the End

I can only hope this one is different. The premise sounds very similar to "Scoring Sacred Body from the Get Go" that MC was extremely arrogant and manipulative.

Good continuation of story. The best thing about this book is his proper pacing while advancing the story of the protagonist.He doesn't hurry it up. Also his storyline has continuously broken through the boundaries of my expectations and I could never even guess what's going to happen next😂

Gives me a little bit the feeling of the tutorial is too hard. The Mc gets no choice but to pick the most difficult mode even harder then the most difficult mode open for public.

The story is great! It has a lot of potential into it! I think this is going to be awesome in the future! So far, after reading the first few chatpers, I believe this novel is amazign!  I commented the things that I think needs editting!I'd like to note that the events felt a bit sudden. It would be fantastic if you could establish the narration first before placing the system. Let' say that the man was weak, like you've said, author. And in that world/village, violence was always the key. Survival of the fittest. Therefore, he needs to do something. It would be better to explain first the situation he was into. Let the thug beat him up. Show the main protagonist he was not meant to wield a gun, but in the end, he was the "top gunner" in the story. In that way, you can make the story more interesting! feel free to disagree, and these are only my suggestions~ Kudos for the author!

Ahem!The shameless first review that is the privilege of the Author.I hope my novel can reach the quality deserving of this review.Happy reading to all!

Writing QualityStability of UpdatesStory DevelopmentCharacter DesignWorld BackgroundI wish I could rate more. Vampires Coffin brought me to Webnovel and I must confess, it's worth it...

this is the first web novel I've seen in this app where I don't have to pay to unlock other chapters I love this keep up the good work 🥰

"I see." She seated herself on the couch – her right elbow propped on the edge of the couch while one of her legs were folded underneath the other.  It was her signature position on the sofa.  It was casual, with a little touch of arrogance and dominance.