Dark Lord: Rise to Power

Fun read, only a few errors concerning names and pronouns, but nothing to distracting

This book definitely illustrates the profoundness of heaven and the innate talent which the author clearly possesses..........................jk Still better than every other option though xd.

It's a good book, an interesting MC and good plot. However they made it into a premium novel...😭😭😭it's too bad that I won't be able to support it anymore...😀😀😀

Just finished free round and gonna give you some honest reviews.First, the game is not based on MMORPG so it's kinda refreshing to read. Second, does it lead to harem? Yes or No. All the party is Female but that's just the setting of the game. So far the flag isn't raised yet but only left to see in the future.Third, The story flow is nice, for those who like fast paced story development probably won't like it but it's just fine for me. Neither rushed nor filled up with filler.I think I'm gonna give further reading if had the chance. Wdyt fellas?

I have read more than 10 novels of similar types on mtlnovel.comand by the experience I can tell you this novel is for those who are new in the novel reading occupation. For experienced readers, you will find all those repetitive scenes like arrogant young masters, unlimited face slapping,all knowing MC, Harem member count +20, 2 chapters full of arrogant young masters taunting MC, 1 whole chapter of melon eating crowds talking about how MC doesn't know how high the sky or how deep the earth is and is sure to get his life destroyed, MC taking 2 or 3+ chapters to respond to arrogant young masters taunting, 2 more chapters in which MC solves that young master and last 1 chapter where crowd realises MC is not to be provoked then 1 epilog where that young master's father plans revenge on MC. After all this the cycle starts again and it repeats until MC goes to immortal world or fights aliens who came to earth thousands of years ago but repelled by Chinese and now that Chinese lost their former legacy, the aliens came back again.

i want you to keep writing it. its a freaking masterpiece. when i heard it got axed i felt really sad so can you please continue writing it.

TLWR(Too long won't read): Don't read it. It's purely wish fulfillment without any struggles. By reading it, you can easily get trapped. It's not worth getting trapped into. The first few chapters had promise of maybe some character relationships or development, but in the end he cut himself off from everyone he knew, spent the rest of his life as a billionaire and a God. On this website, there's nothing wrong with wish fulfillment because that's just the kind of stories that are highly rated here. But really, this story is just nonsensical. The author doesn't even bother to look up anything science related as a lot of the things here are pulled straight from his ass. He has a shallow perception of how the world works, and that is detrimental to writing a story ABOUT creating a FREAKING WORLD.Translation quality: It's okay, no typos or anything. The translation and grammar itself is understandableStability of updates: It updates daily, so if you got sucked into this trap of a novel, you'll have a hard time getting out.Story development: As of now, anything interesting has been thrown out of the window. I suspect that it might be a long time until the main character finds himself struggling with something again because he is literally a god at this point, both in terms of the world he's making, and the power he has in the real world. At the start, the author was doing something really interesting with the character. It showed that the main character was slowly becoming disconnected and less human as he became more and more powerful. The author could've delved deeper into the philosophy of being a human and becoming a God. On the values of life. But clearly, the author doesn't actually understand the value of being human as he just went ahead and made the main character cut off from the rest of the world so he could focus on being a god. I could even feel that this isn't what the character wanted. At the start, you can see his frustrations of not being able to get the girl even with mind reading. He's constantly haunted by his failed romantic relationship by the little sister of his ex. His two relationships after coming in touch with mind power had broken off of him because he didn't seem to love him. The author could've delved deep into the psychology of being all-powerful in exchange of your personal connections with other people. BUT, not all people on this website are looking for something great. Let's talk about in webnovel standards. First, a protaganist with a cheat, great! Second, beautiful love interests, great! Third, an external goal which drives the plot (curing himself of his cancer), great! What happens after he cured himself of cancer? Well, he just did his own thing and left everyone he knew. Now there was no direction besides building the world he created. What about the world he was creating? Maybe there are some fantastic struggles that could pull you in? Well, all of them are glossed over! Since it's a perspective of a god, everything happens in a blink of an eye. The most touching emotions I have felt so far is the one with the first human king and the first elf. I hope that the novel sprinkles more of these in the future, but I'm just really frustrated with the lack of struggle. Even mainstream novels at least pretend to have struggles for the mc before face slapping the villain with the main character's cheat!Character design: For me, every character besides the MC is more loveable. I just can't stand the MC not because of himself, but because I can see how unnatural it is for the MC to do all of these things. As a writer and a reader, I feel that the MC has a lot that he wants to say, but is drowned by the voice of the author. The life of the MC, ironically even though he's becoming a god, he can only be controlled by the author without doing what he actually wants. He is simply the author's avatar, with no will of his own. AGHHWorld background: A LOT of the logic doesn't make sense, BUT the system of getting mind power from the zero dimension is cool. If I could, I would write with this concept. It's cool because it explains why the beings in the world he created are able to get power from the source. But on a downside, the author clearly does not understand how 2D organisms work. You can't just lob an ant into a 2D space. Only a cross section would freaking fit because of the dimensions. It won't become a fucking drawing. Though it's understandable since the platform he was using was a scroll and kind of like a painting aesthetic? But it contradicts the actual laws of dimensions. Well, he was saying something like the 2d world in the scroll was slowly becoming 3d, but the author was pulling A LOT OF BULLSHIT LOGIC FROM HIS ASS. Just remembering how he turned the scroll world livable is just painful. My braincells are dying from trying to comprehend his flawed logic.Final note: I wanted this to work. I, personally, want to feel what it's like to be God, but this novel oversimplifies it. I feel sorrow for the main character because he has such a terrible author. Who knows, maybe it'll get better in the future. But in the end, chapter 42 is a bad place to be. A reader should never go to a bad place just to read the good parts. I'll probably still follow this book because I am indeed in the trap of reading it, but I still have the hope that it becomes better.If it becomes premium, I'll delete this book from my library. Peace.

I will not be reviewing my own book, of course. Anyone who does read it PLEASE leave a review and rating, I would appreciate it greatly. Thanks!!