Dark Heart, Gentle Hands

Truly loved this. Its been a while since i read a football novel this good. Even though the translation was problematic, i enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for creating this novel.

In short I like it its one of the mature type stories I readied for past times Its good by the way keep it up :) and thank you in advance for the updates :)

The mc is a total retard. In the beginning of chapter it's said that auron can drop the item also there is no contract time that said after the duel the guild and his character must instantly be deleted. He can first calm his mine assembly the elite team that got the potion and ask them first then investigate the cold bank acc and etc and make a proof to trap vice guild and detroy her then assembly the upper echelon of the guild, it's unreasonable if in the whole guild he is the only pillar there's must be someone that he can trust and give the equipment to him and give the leadership to another one so that they can't be bribe and keep each other check then delete the character and start new. I don't hate this kind of novel but this mc is total retard ...

Thanks for answering I wrote this as a review because I didn't give you 5 stars on the other review.

A great read! You can tell where they got the inspiration from, but the author made it their own storyline. Good pacing and easy flow of the story. Hoping for more chapters! Keep up the good work :)

5 star rating for a well put together story. It's embarassing to say but this is the first story I felt so attached to, 100% honesty. Reading this story gave me chills though, a man with that much power, i love, love, love it. Gotta say I look up to the author for having such talent.

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In the beginning it was church now it jump to exploring the universe which then leads to a crowd of side characters gathered together, the MC isn't really introduced all that much, the only thing we know is his nameA  beauty  introduced into first chapter but its not a "jade" beauty along with a lot of inspiration from other worksit can engage a reader who isn't all that curious and want to waste time. Even the outlines of bolding words, exclamation points (!) actually feel like we're inside the author creation.Although the mona building isn't really describe how big it is until a few chapters later.I would say as someone who spent the first few chapters reading it can really engage you to a world of likable fantasy.Some scenes like magician ones could using clapping to draw attention of the background character in front of them or those around them when they're yelling/scolding others for mistakesHowever in chapter two there is 2 random bolded texts that were suppose to be inaudible, what is this about?In chapter 3, romance is in the works. This kind of engages more plotline depends on how you view/build itI like how you introduced assassins who hide with cloaks on.I get your trying to switch povs a lot, I think labeling that pov from side pov to MC pov may be a good idea to not confuse readersOther than the first few chapters in, you are doing well so for on your novel.