Dark Baptism

All it took was 4 chapters to see that story is just hot garbage. The only good points is that they are translating the novel very well and the editing is pretty okay as well. Now to the bad, we're do I start. First the author summarizes before MC travels back in time in 4 sentences. 4 ****ty sentences. No background, no characterization. Multiple pov shifts that can confuse a reader. No background to base our understanding of the MC and side characters after time shift. A broken game system that randomizes a new players ability and forces them to stay with those stats even if they remake a new character. That's a broken system only someone who knows nothing about how games work and was to lazy to research for 5 minutes.If I could, I would message the author directly and tell him to burn this story from existence.

very good all around.................................... ..................................................................................

Well great start no weak to strong mc directly op mcGreat good vocublary now 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

I didn't like the MC's development and the general direction the story was going was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo disappointing

five stars. this novel basically does everything right and the writing and grammar are also really goodi just hope it won't be like other novels where they take a break and never returnall in all i would recommend this novel, just read the first few chaps and you'll be hooked trust me

Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.

So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.

Shameless! yuri? vampires? blood? way to use said blood? oh yes and so much more! come join Kiada on her journey to find her lost girls in another reborn series!this book is part of the reborn collection Harem RebornHyde, Worldwalker Reborn