This novel is amazing, I usually read content with lots of fights, but in 40 chapters I fell in love with this, it's a slice of life that has cultivation around it, but the greater focus is in the relationship the protagonist has with other characters, their personalities are all well built, the story makes sense and is captivating. There are tids and bits of comedy but also lots of sweet moments throughout it, I guess there will be fights once the protagonist reaches a certain level of power, but for now, only trivial things bothered him, to a level where anyone could experience the same thing. Give this story a go, fights and near death situations are not the only quality content out there.
A very interesting novel but as many have pointed out the grammatical errors are really annoying.Pls fix them asap atleast the first 30 chaps else it'll be a shame if this gem doesn't get recognition because of this simple mistake
Let us put aside Mad Snail variable from this review. From early chaps I see major drawback from early chapters. In this genre Author need to plant the seed of curiousity a.k.a potential plot development in early chapters because avid reader already read many kind of this novel. But except grinding we don't see much in 40 chaps. I think author just going slow and steady for development.Other than that, we already got some potential major conflicts, Iron willed MC that have grip on his temper, and our favorite and probably one of most produced genre. Wdyt fellow daoist?
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Warnings on the intro were good. I think it's needed because of using third party to publish. Story is good, i couldn't measure the updating frequency, they all have been released in same day. keep going on to write.
Bewildered, Lewis mentally asked Jarvis, "Hey Jarvis, whats this new feature ? ". Jarvis curtly replied to him by saying," Please check your status. ". Dissatisfied with the short answer from his mental companion, Lewis mentally called out, " Status "
"Yeah. I have to watch it 'cause you're an intern at that same studio and you don't want to give the scoop so I have to watch for it. I wish I was assigned to that studio....They definately split us up by sendiing me all the way to younder."
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