Cursed Immortality

I would only say about this story that if you like a shrewd and astute Mc you would love it...
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A real hidden gem among the pile of trash in web novels..amazing story with a realistic ruthless mc..Quality of writing is superb..and I can't wait for more chapters to be released..Highly recommended novel read it and you won't regret

Review after chapter 217.
Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks.

Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance?

Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech.

Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion.

This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!

There are only 23 chapters out right now, but so far its great. The grammar is much better than the start of the authors other book.......,,

The novel starts of slow but picks up the pace ,one of the things i didn't like in this novel of the character of the mc ,the mc is too paranoid and wants respect even when he had not shown half his capability, sometimes he lets someone live even after seeing one of his best technique and uses enemies tools without knowing consequences .

a really great novel and perfect mc cold and ruthless doesn't have some dumb hero complex would even let millions die on his way to immorality.

I don’t really have much to say about it. One of the best novels I’ve read in a while. The protagonist is absolutely amazing. No romance as well which is great.

where are new chaptersssssssss..........