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I liked the story if it weren't for the sister thing then I'd probably check it out on Patreon. wish you luck but nope the taboo put me off this. the MC's ideas and how attitude besides the taboo is something I like plus his "character" traits.
The way the author write is kinda unique, using himself as a narrator and describing the situation work. But it's confusing on it's own, the way the author use punctuation is a mess. And too much "tell" that make it bland.But the story was good, the concept of revenge are neatly arranged with nerdy past of mc.Overall, it's decent to read.
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Helo, the development is interesting so far and I had a good laugh from some jokes. Just note some grammar errors and it'll be good to go. Unique way of writing too.Keep up the good work.
we meet again pancakewitch... I will now enjoy myself to another of your novel. idk how but you have like 6 others books idk how. anyway back to the book... you had me at dragon and witch and I started reading.
This was wrong... Helena was supposed to be the killer, the murderer behind all this. The accident, the sudden downfall of the beautiful life of Delphi. But now, as she looked into familiar shades, there was no deceit in her words.
My current situation is more secure than those shut-ins, as such all of the kid's thoughts are blocked for now and also senses, from me that is, as I learnt how to use some of the orb's powers myself, I will know once we leave this place or when the danger is gone.
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