"Ahhh it's n..nothing... Uhmmm... I'm kind of starting to get embarrased now 'cause of those two (Dad and Chloe) might as well start playing.. Hehe" scratching my head, making a wierd force smile, letting out a little bit of giggle and immediately left. I am trying to evade this situation from Mom (about her being an absurd parent). Hope this work.
I live a good adolescence, I fell in love but did not have the courage to confess. My aunt's business was growing all over the country. Our family was happy.
i like the power system i like the main character and his powers. the novel is quite good besides the interactions in the Terrace family and the reason the head send the mc to his death, it's abysmally bad like come on the head of the family sent the mc to his death because he felt threatened by him by the way his talent is the lowest it can be E-rank, and supposedly the mc's mother and uncle love him a lot, but i don't see it, the mother she is she doesn't go to save him despite being really strong sometimes she hates the mc's father because he sent him to his death and most of the time she doesn't care about it.i don't know what to say anymore, i tried to read it i really did but every time the interactions happen I'm turned off like it's so inconsistent like how could you claim to love your son/nephew and do shit about him.bye
It's too draggy but interesting, I love how the ml love the twins but it's focused too much on the twins. The pace is too slow, I hope the author also focussed on the surroundings not only to the twins and the ml. Though I like it, since I like kids.
62 ch5 stars~! First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments. Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original.Good character design.Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good.The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes?Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters. If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥)However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars.♡⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝
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